1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000s of apologies . I know my blog has died and i am sorry , couldn't find time to post .
Anyways , today , i am going to post a blog post about the Socrastic seminar on the topic lamb to the slaughter. My role for this "outer ring" is a black hat .
I feel that the areas that may need improvement was
- Too much repetition . Most of the ideas said was clearly repeated , well some where to re-emphasise.
- too soft . LOUDER !
- try not to go 'um' too much . "um .. i think . um ... the real lamb is um ... mary . um .. because um .." NO !!!
- ORIGINALITY ! not many of us demonstrated that on Friday . Most of us
were just adding on to what the previous speakers were saying - speak with a mellow-er tone . THIS IS NOT A DEBATE!!! CHILL!!!
Alvin :{.<33
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